Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Retelling The Butter Trap by Chris

There was a girl who was told to get some butter. She went to the corner store, when she got the butter she was swinging it and it fell out. The butter land on the gutter. 

When she got home she lied to her mum that there was a nasty boy who chased her down the road. Mum was so nice because she believed her. 

Dad arrived home for lunch, they went to the nasty boy’s house to solve the problem.
But the nasty boy wasn’t there! He was at boarding school. And dad knew that she was lying.





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